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This was excellently dark and menacing, thank you for sharing

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The story's use of interview-style really heightens the intimacy and realism of Rowena's experience. It is dread-filled, tactile (disgustingly so), invasive, and very detailed. It makes it incredibly unsettling. I think the current setting fits it perfectly to highlight not just the ambiguity between supernatural terror and psychological breakdown but also her belief in the hallucinations.

This kind of horror haunts and blurs the lines at the memory and sanity. Ugh, I already don't like bugs in general, but you captured the visceral disgust of it so well.

The true horror is that the nightmare never leaves, it just waits for us to remember it. Amazing work, as usual. ❤

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